Introduction
In Part 1 of
the IELTS Writing test you might be asked to describe a process. IELTS Task 1
process questions are not as common as charts or graphs, but they do come
up occasionally. They are much easier to answer than the other Task 1 questions, but many people do not
prepare for them at all. This is a big risk to take because it does not take
long to familiarise yourself with these questions and learn how to answer them properly.
This post will
show you:
1. the different types of process question
2. a 5 step plan for answering any process question
3. how to write an introduction
4. how to pick out the main features and write an
overview
5. how to write about each stage in detail
6. how to sequence your language
1. Different Types of Process Question
There are generally two different types of process question: natural and man-made.
A. Natural processes - include things like the life cycle of a butterfly or frog, pregnancy, the water cycle or how cows produce milk.
Below is the process is photosynthesis:
B. Man-made process - you might also be asked to describe a man-made process like how coffee, tea, beer or wine are made, how cement or bricks are produced or how an ATM or the internet works. Below is the man-made process of nuclear power generation:
It does not
matter if it is man-made or a natural process. The same skills and system we
use to answer process questions for both.
2. Writing Task 1 Process Questions: 5 Step Plan
To understand
the task and quickly make a plan to answer process questions you should
follow the 5 steps below:
1. Understand the
process - find the start and the end of the process. Count how many stages there
are and understand what each stage does and the relationship it has with the
stage before and after it.
One of the most challenging things about these questions is having to write about something you have never seen or heard of before. Don’t worry, try to remember two things:
First - the examiner knows that you have probably never seen this process before and you have only 20 minutes to write about it. They do not expect a perfect answer. Just pick out the main features and report them accurately.
Second - you can quickly understand any process by asking yourself these questions:
- Where does the process start and where does it end?
- How many stages are there?
- Is it a man-made process or natural process?
- Is it a cyclical (in a circle) or linear (one start point and one end point) process?
- Are there any materials that need to be added to the process?
- What is produced?
- What does each stage of the process do?
- What are the relationships between each stage?
The processes you will be asked to write about in the IELTS test will not be very complicated and you should be able to easily answer all of the questions above. When you do this you will completely understand what is happening and you will be able to start writing your answer.
2. Paraphrase the question.
Every process question follows the same format. First it tells you some general information about the process and then it instructs you to ‘Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.’
For example,
the question above states:
- The diagram below shows the process of photosynthesis. (General information)
- Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features. (Instructions)
The first thing we need to do in every question is to paraphrase the general information. Paraphrasing is one of the most important IELTS skills to master. We paraphrase a sentence by rewriting it so that the words are different but the meaning stays the same. There are a few different ways we can do this but the easiest way is to use synonyms and change the word order of the sentence. Synonyms are different words that have the same meaning, for example, woman and female.
Let’s look at the questions above and paraphrase them.
Question 1:
The diagram below shows the process of photosynthesis.
Paraphrased: The
illustration demonstrates how plants produce energy from sunlight.
Question 2:
The diagram below shows how electricity is produced in a nuclear power station.
Paraphrased:
The illustration below shows the process of how nuclear power plants make electricity.
Every time you
see an Academic Task 1 question rewrite the question and this should be your
first paragraph. We can no move on and write our next paragraph; the overview.
3. Overview of
Process
The overview is probably the most important paragraph in the whole essay. If you do not write an overview it is extremely difficult to get a high mark in IELTS Task 1, however, if you learn how to write a good one, you are far more likely to get the score you deserve.
Overviews for
process questions can be done quite easily by asking yourself a few questions.
The answers to these questions will allow you to form 2 overview sentences.
- Is it a
man-made or natural process?
- How many
stages are there?
- What is
produced?
- Where does it
start and where does it end?
- Is it cyclical
or linear?
- Are any
materials added?
You might not be able to answer all of these for each process question, but you will always be able to answer enough of them to be able to write a good overview.
Let’s look at
one of the previous examples:
- Is it a man-made or natural process? Natural
- How many stages are there? Five
- What is produced? Sugar, oxygen and starch.
- Where does it start and where does it end? Starts with sun and end with production sugar, oxygen and starch.
- Is it cyclical or linear? Linear.
- Are any materials added? Sunlight, CO2 and water.
We can then use this information to make two sentences:
Photosynthesis
is a natural linear process that starts with sunshine and carbon dioxide being
absorbed and ends with the production of sugar, oxygen and starch. There are
five main stages to this process and it allows plants to convert light energy
to chemical energy in the form of sugar.
Let’s look at
the other example:
- Is it a man-made or natural process? Man-made
- How many stages are there? Six
- What is produced? Electricity
- Where does it start and where does it end? Starts with uranium fuel and ends with electricity being sent to the grid.
- Is it cyclical or linear? Linear
- Are any materials added? Water and uranium
This is a man-made linear process that starts with the uranium fuel and water creating steam and ends with electricity being sent to the grid. There are 6 main stages including steam production, turbines driving a generator and a transformer creating electricity.
This system can be used for any process question and allows you to produce clear overviews each time. We can now move on to detailing each stage of the process in our next paragraphs.
4. Detail Each
Stage of the Process
Now that we have paraphrased the question and provided an overview we need to tell the examiner about each stage in more detail. You can:
- say what each
stage does
- what it
produces
- if any
materials are added
- and/or discuss
the relationship with the previous or subsequent stages.
Sequencing the Process
Try to
sequence your language and make your details easier to read by using language
like:
- Firstly
- First of all
- Secondly
- After that
- From this
- Where
- Following that
- Subsequently
- Before that
- In turn
- Then
Make sure you know the meaning and grammar of the words and phrases above before you use them. Do not use them if you are not 100% sure about how they should be used in a sentence.
Examples
Let’s detail each stage for the first process:
First of all,
chlorophyll allows the plant to take in sunlight along the green spectrum and
the leaves also absorb carbon dioxide through openings in their surface. At the
same time, water is sucked up through the roots and this is combined with CO2
and the sun’s rays to produce sugar that can be utilised by the plant for
food.
Oxygen and
water are the byproducts of this chemical reaction and it is extracted
through a process called transpiration. Water evaporates from the leaves and O2
is released. Any extra sugar is deposited in the roots as starch.
You will
notice that there are 2 separate paragraphs. I advise students to try and split
the process in two and then write two paragraphs. Separating the process into 2
parts makes it easier to understand and easier to write about. Not all
processes have two distinct parts but most of the IELTS questions I have seen
can be treated in this way.
We will now detail each stage of the next question:
First of all,
uranium fuel creates heat in the steam generator and this water vapor flows
through pipes to a turbine. The steam causes the turbine to spin and in turn
powers a generator which subsequently creates electricity.
After that,
electricity from the generator is transferred to a transformer where the
electric can be changed to a form that is ready to be sent to the grid to power
homes and industry. Hot water makes its way to a cooling tower, condenses and
then returns to the turbine or can flow into the cold water source.
5. Check
Your Essay
You should try to leave 3-4 minutes at the end to check and improve your work. Many students do not do this because they feel they do not have enough time, however, it is better to try and get everything done in 15 minutes and then check and refine your work, than do everything in 20 minutes.
Things that you should check are:
- Are there any
spelling or punctuation mistakes?
- Are the verbs
the correct tense?
- Does the
process I describe make sense? Does it match the diagram?
- Is there any
vocabulary repetition we could remove with synonyms?
- Do I have 4
clear paragraphs.
- Did I write
over 150 words?
- Have I
included things only obvious from the diagram?
- Have I included
the main features in the overview?
Sample Answers
Look at both
of the first drafts and comment below with any improvements you would make.
First Draft of
Process Question 1
The illustration demonstrates how plants produce energy from sunlight.
Photosynthesis
is a natural linear process that starts with sunshine and carbon dioxide being
absorbed and ends with the production of sugar, oxygen and starch. There are
five main stages to this process and it allows plants to convert light energy
to chemical energy in the form of sugar.
First of all,
chlorophyll allows the plant to take in sunlight along the green spectrum and
the leaves also absorb carbon dioxide through openings in their surface. At the
same time, water is sucked up through the roots and this is combined with CO2
and the sun’s rays to produce sugar that can be utilised by the plant for
food.
Oxygen and
water are the byproducts of this chemical reaction and it is extracted
through a process called transpiration. Water evaporates from the leaves and O2
is released. Any extra sugar is deposited in the roots as starch.
First Draft of
Process Question 2
The
illustration below show the process of how nuclear power plants make
electricity.
This is a
man-made linear process that starts with the uranium fuel and water creating
steam and ends with electricity being sent to the
grid. There are 6 main stages including steam production, turbines driving
a generator and a transformer creating electricity.
First of all,
uranium fuel creates heat in the steam generator and this water vapor flows
through pipes to a turbine. The steam causes the turbine to spin and in turn
powers a generator which subsequently creates electricity.
After that, electricity from the generator is transferred to a transformer where the electric can be changed to a form that is ready to be sent to the grid to power homes and industry. Hot water makes its way to a cooling tower, condenses and then returns to the turbine or can flow into the cold water source.
After that, electricity from the generator is transferred to a transformer where the electric can be changed to a form that is ready to be sent to the grid to power homes and industry. Hot water makes its way to a cooling tower, condenses and then returns to the turbine or can flow into the cold water source.
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