With the increased
global demand in oil and gas, undiscovered areas of the world should be opened
up to access more resources.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
One of the things to
notice about this essay is that it has a very short introduction and
conclusion. It retains all of the elements of a good introduction (paraphrase
question, give opinion and outline main ideas) and conclusion (summarise main
ideas and give opinion again), but does so with fewer words. This allows you to
spend more time on your main body paragraphs; where most of the marks are won
and lost. However, this is a very advanced technique because it requires a very
high level of English to say lots of things with fewer words. This is a skill you
should try to master if you want to get one of the higher band scores.
Answer
This essay disagrees that untapped
resources should be explored because of the environmental risks and the fact
that there are renewable options available.
Many argue that energy companies
should be granted access to previously unexplored areas, but this would be a
huge mistake because of the potential for environmental damage. Drilling for
non-renewable energy resources is incredibly damaging to the local ecosystem
and these areas are often in sensitive places, such as the Arctic
or National Parks in the United States and Canada. The Deep Water Horizon
disaster demonstrated just how disastrous an oil spill can be for the animals
and plant life in the local vicinity. Therefore, damaging these untouched
areas is too much of a risk and oil companies should be banned from doing
business there.
Taking these risks becomes pointless
when you consider that there are plenty of viable alternative energy sources
available. Solar, wind and tidal energy could replace our reliance on oil and
gas completely within just 15 years, if the industries were given enough
funding. CEO of Solar City and Tesla, Elon Musk, recently demonstrated this by
drawing a very small square on a map of the United States and stating
confidently that small area could power the whole of the country, if covered
with solar panels. He also stated that we could further reduce our need for oil
by building electric cars rather than those with combustion engines.
In conclusion, sensitive areas should
not be made available to fossil fuel companies because of the environmental
risks and the fact that our future energy needs can be met by renewable energy.
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